writing scared

in room 11 we have been doing emotion stories; this story is about scared. (it isn't real.)

I was going to the zoo. I got packed up with some of these things; a hat. a very big crumbed ham and cheese sandwich from McDonald's, sunscreen and a tiny piece of string. (I don’t know why I took that.) I took my 918 spyder to the zoo last time and crashed it in the tiny car park. So I was only taking my GT1 road model with me today.

I got through the car park fine. It cost me $500.00 to get in so I decided to make the most of the day. Just as I walked though the last gate to the zoo I realized a very fat giraffe was about to sit on me! I dive to the side, just as its bottom hit the ground. A ute with a tall and thin trailer smashed into the giraffe’s head and must have got knocked out! Then I fainted with fright.

It took me a while to make out what was happening then I realised that I had just fainted for about 2 seconds because some people were stuffing the giraffe into the truck trailer! The men must have been pushing pretty hard because just then the trailer erupted with bits of wood. when the dust cleared the giraffe jumped over the gates and ran of. the end.